Little Paper Plane

We have to design and make a mini comic? so this is what I came out with.

ENJOY

But before enjoying the comic...here is the behind the scene thing.

 - Story board and layout design -

- This was the first sketch I did of the comic, it was shorter and much simpler with very little square blocks. It didn't work for me because I ended the story too soon, so there was no climax what so ever into the story and it was a little bland to me.

- The next two sketch you see are an edited version of the first sketch on the comic's story board. I added more blocks and made the story longer and now it comes with a climax and the story was no longer boring.

- At my half way point through the story....yey! 

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NOW ON TO THE MAIN EVENT

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*note that it is impossible to fly someone a paper air plane through land and sea….this is purely from my imagination….any lost paper air plane will not be tolerated….fly at your own risk*

You read the comic from left to right, then from right to left…your eye movement will slowly form a ‘S’ like shape much like a descending paper air plane.

This story is about a long distant pen pal, passing notes with each other through a simple paper air plane.

In the first page you can see a girl happily sitting down under a tree and getting ready to read a massage that she just received. Notice that the back ground of the girl is all happy and sunny bright. Moving along the page, as the girl open the massage, the scene change from a nice looking landscape to a more horrid looking landscape with a house on fire, later you see a girl wearing a kimino looking down while holding a letter. As tears run down her face the comic continue to the next page (following the tear)

On the second page, you see the continuation of the tear and it later became the tear from the ponytail girl. Because the ponytail girl felt sad for the bunhead girl, she decided to send her some words of encouragement in a form of a paper plane. She then folded the paper plane and flies over to the next page and got stuck in a tree.

On the third and final page, you will see the bunhead girl noticing that there is a paper plane stuck in the tree, she grabs with a long stick with nets attached at the ends. Before she opens there paper plane, notice her facial expression is all sad and moody, but after she opens the paper plane she looks up with a smile. then it later shows that her surrounding land scape is all flourish and beautiful.

- FIN-